There was once a man called Jeffrey and he liked to shoot arrows but after he shoots the target he paints the target so people think that he can shoot the arrows in the center of the target. Jeffery has bright , yellow hair like a bright , banana with bright , blue clothes with bright white shoes with a bit of pink, bigfoot feet . Then when Jeffery met the archer the archer was surprised. Because he shot the arrows in the center of the target he couldn't believe his eyes. He has never seen that before but he said to Jeffrey I can hit the target but you can not only hit the target you can hit the middle of it. Jeffery said I shoot the arrow then I paint the target around it then the archer said but what if you were in a tournament would you do the same and he said I would if they weren’t painted. He often doesn’t socialise with other people he just stays at his farm and practise his shooting arrows. Jeffery likes shooting targets it is his favorite thing. The little man was surprised when he told the archer the truth. He has 34boys and 2 girls the girls are named Ariana,Anna-lee the boys are named Mark, Tyson,Kaiden,Cordell and forgot 30 of them. For the rest of the 8 hours he feed 40 pigs and 20 chickens and 1 horse 2 guinea pigs and 3m rabbits 6 sheeps he was a very busy man when it comes to his animals kids.
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ReplyDeleteHi Tama,
ReplyDeleteThis blog post is amazing but when you said bright,blue I would I put the text color as blue not yellow.I noticed a few mistakes near the end you probably didn't notice because it was near the end. Overall this was a fantastic blog post.