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Thursday, July 1, 2021

Hitting the target

This is was we did for writing. hope you like it?

 

3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Tama
    I liked the way you showed us your story map.
    Maybe you could check your spelling before you post.
    Next time you could add a bit more detail.

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  2. hello Tama i really like your story map but maybe next time you could add some info about the story

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  3. Hi Tama,
    WOW!
    I really like this because you have drawed it instead of writing it this is very cool and interesting to me. Maybe next time you could add more detail but other then that this looks amazing!

    From Savarnah

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