Grandad
Grandad on a
Grandad on a go cart
Grandad on a go cart going fast
Grandad on a go cart going fast with the
Grandad on a go cart going fast with the tires going
Grandad on a go cart going fast with the tires going fast to
Grandad on a go cart going fast with the tires going fast to his house
Grandad on a go cart going fast with the tires going fast to his house with his grandson
The go cart
The go cart is red
The go cart is red with white
The go cart is red with white stripes on
The go cart is red with white stripes on it with
The go cart is red with white stripes on it with a black steering wheel
The go cart is red with white stripes on it with a black steering wheel and black
The go cart is red with white stripes on it with a black steering wheel and a black rubber
The go cart is red with white stripes on it with a black steering wheel and a black rubber with it.
The little boy
The little boy is going
The little boy is going really fast
The little boy is going really fast because he
The little boy is going really fast because he was racing
The little boy is going really fast because he was racing his grandad
The little boy is going really fast because he was racing his grandad to his
The little boy is going really fast because he was racing his grandad to his grandads house
The little boy is going really fast because he was racing his grandad to his grandads house but his grandad fell.
Why did you make this be
ReplyDeletebecause it was fun
DeleteKIA Ora Tama
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you added a lot of words to make the sentence a lot bigger and better.
Next time you could tell us why you did this.
Maybe you could put the paragraphs on different blog posts so it is not so long.
i like the words i don't know why
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Tama,
ReplyDeleteI like how colourful you made the words. It makes it stand out. This reminds me of another person that made a similiar blogpost. Maybe next time you could add a picture next to some of the words. Why did you make your writing so big?
Hey Tama,
ReplyDeleteI like how you used your ideas to make some funny stuff I like the colerful words and how much you did. maybe next time you could you could add a photo or something like that
From>Josh
Good job Tama with your granddad in a go cart grid you did a really good job on it. It did look like it took a long time to make so tell me how long did it take to make this? Next time you could tell me why you had to make this or did you just make this for fun but good job.
ReplyDeleteHi Tama,
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post because I like the colours but also its cause how you laid it out, Did you think about making colours or doing other colours? why did you do this?
Question: What was your favourite bit about the Writing?
From Ryleigh
Hello Tama,
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog you have made.
I also love the colors you have used.
How long did this take to do?
Was it fun to make?
From Savarnah