This is what I did for my own time and I hope you like it.
Monday, November 8, 2021
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Kia ora Tama
ReplyDeletewow this story is really Interesting.
I like how much effort you put into it.
What is your favorite part of the story or person?
Maybe next time you could add a bit more info into the blurb so that the reader knows more about this story.
Kind regards
Emma
Kia Ora Tama
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you said penny wise was in it.
Maybe you could add the names of the kids.
cant wait for part two.
Kia ora Tama this story is really interesting but i feel like some bits need a bit more explaining but everything else is amazing
ReplyDeletedid you enjoy making this?
Hi Tama,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you added some friends of pennywise instead of just him
next you should tell us the kids names and what they look like and what they like to do.
Why did you pick pennywise?