Light A match
See: Tama saw the stick scratch across the box when Mr Gold Swiped it on the box.
Hear: Tama heard a loud crackle when it was scratching on the box as Mr Gold swished it on the box.
Smell: Tama smelt the smoke and it smelt like smokey clouds as I smelt it.
Taste: Tama tasted the stick and it tasted like wood and it was not food so you could not eat.
Feel: Tama felt the stick and it was burning like a hot firework on my hand.
Very good I love how you have told us exactly what has happened this is a great story.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Tama Its a great story. But it still has some descriptive words.
ReplyDelete^.^ I liked the word crackle.
Wow Tama, that is a lot of detail you put into it. I like the sentence
ReplyDeletewhere you described what you heard. Well done.