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Friday, May 17, 2019

This is my island for if I`m lost in the beach I could just build a hut so I can keep warm  and lit fire to keep warm it was about the gentle giant story.
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  1. Millie JJuly 22, 2019 at 7:35 PM

    Hi Tama,

    I enjoyed the part when you added detail into the map of the island you also taught me to add more detail into my work and be proud of what i did.
    Try and add some key words on the island so people know where they are and what they are.Instead of putting it into the picture just say the sun for example you don't want it to be in the sun OK. :)

    Millie J

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